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Tuesday 17 January 2012

Steven & laurence, Thriller break down, plot and script

Scene 1: Steven’s conservatory                                                                3 characters total
                                                                                                                   John- Jake
1, multiple shots of Ryan working                                                                 James- Lorry
                                                                                                                   Ryan- Steven
Outside shot
Inside shot
Kitchen window shot

2, character appears fine, normality, quiet

First flash back
Second flash back
Third flash back

3, first flash back

Running through the woods, high speed, multiple angles
Over head

4, cuts back to conservatory,

Character begins to look distort, worried, phased

5, Second flash back

Running, first person shot, breathing heavily, looking about frantically

6, Cuts back to conservatory

Close up of Character, eyes, book, losing focus

7, final flash back

Side angle, branch brakes beneath feat whilst running, trips falls, close up, fade to black

Scene 2:  wood Ponds? Cold, bright, normality

1, pan shot of pond, fishing, camp

3 characters sitting around camp, fishing, quiet, peaceful

2, second character reveals a small bottle containing unknown pills

Script:
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James - (revealing bottle of pills) I picked these babies up off a friend up In Stamford

Ryan - so this was the little surprise you were talking about earlier

John - What surprise, what are you guys talking about!?

James - (shows john the bottle) now I’ve been told they got quite a kick, so if your too much of a pussy john, u can fuck off now

John - (hesitant, cautious, looks at Ryan) Ryan, a.a.are you sure we should be doing this?, I don’t like this at all

Ryan - (grabs the pills of James) quit being such a little fag john, u gotta try everything once right? (opens bottle,  hands James one, holds another out to john)

John - …

Ryan – You gunna take it then? (john reluctantly takes the pill from Ryan)

James – atta boy, guess you’re not such a massive fag after all…

Close up of the three characters hands, with a small white pill in each, camera rotates around the three characters, they take the pill

3, Cuts to black

4, first person shot, vision blurry, Ryan laying on the floor, looks about

Ryan sees john with a fishing knife held to James’s neck against a tree, fades to black (losing consciousness)

5, ( Ryan regains consciousness) first person shot, camp is destroyed, no sign of James, blood in the water

John walking over slowly, close up of knife by his side covered in blood, Ryan’s vision begins to blur and fade again as he losses consciousness)

6, Ryan back in the conservatory, he looks down, and reveals a clean shiny knife, runs his fingers along the blade, a single tear rolls down his face and hits the blade, cuts to black

The END

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